way too stiff Artdon't trace my roughsdraw them and try to get some organic feeling into themyou've evened everything outtoo many straight lines and mathematical curvesloosen up!
hmm, i didn't trace the rough, so maybe my eye is getting better.i'll try to loosen up! one of these days, it'll stick in my thick skull.
Say, Art: do you mind if I help color your super-sweet banner?Right now, I'm working on your inked version (with the red pencil), and I'm hoping I could help.
Yeah, the feet and a few other things are evened out... wait, I just read John's comments.Nevermind.Yeah, I've had a number of people tell me to loosen up my copies... I'll race you to figure out what they mean! :)- trevor.
Great studies nonetheless. Keep it up man, you get better everytime! :D
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John K put up some rough sketches of scenes to practice doing Layout. Here is my first meager attempt.
John K put up some rough sketches of scenes to practice doing Layout. Here is my first meager attempt.
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way too stiff Art
don't trace my roughs
draw them and try to get some organic feeling into them
you've evened everything out
too many straight lines and mathematical curves
loosen up!
hmm, i didn't trace the rough, so maybe my eye is getting better.
i'll try to loosen up! one of these days, it'll stick in my thick skull.
Say, Art: do you mind if I help color your super-sweet banner?
Right now, I'm working on your inked version (with the red pencil), and I'm hoping I could help.
Yeah, the feet and a few other things are evened out... wait, I just read John's comments.
Nevermind.
Yeah, I've had a number of people tell me to loosen up my copies... I'll race you to figure out what they mean! :)
- trevor.
Great studies nonetheless. Keep it up man, you get better everytime! :D
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