Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Slab & Ernie layout practice! UPDATE!

UPDATE: second attempt


John K put up some rough sketches of scenes to practice doing Layout. Here is my first meager attempt.





5 comments:

JohnK said...

way too stiff Art

don't trace my roughs

draw them and try to get some organic feeling into them


you've evened everything out

too many straight lines and mathematical curves


loosen up!

ArtF said...

hmm, i didn't trace the rough, so maybe my eye is getting better.

i'll try to loosen up! one of these days, it'll stick in my thick skull.

J.R. Spumkin said...

Say, Art: do you mind if I help color your super-sweet banner?

Right now, I'm working on your inked version (with the red pencil), and I'm hoping I could help.

Trevor Thompson said...

Yeah, the feet and a few other things are evened out... wait, I just read John's comments.

Nevermind.

Yeah, I've had a number of people tell me to loosen up my copies... I'll race you to figure out what they mean! :)

- trevor.

Sean Worsham said...

Great studies nonetheless. Keep it up man, you get better everytime! :D